Effective business sentences
Directions: Revise these sentences so that they are an
effective business sentence. You do not have to write the original sentences,
just your rewrites, but the sentences must be grammatically correct and carry
the same meaning as the original.
1. Because
we need more space for our new inventory, we're staging a two-for-one sale.
2. So that
we may bring our customer records up-to-date and eliminate the expense of
duplicate mailings, we are asking you to complete the enclosed card.
3. If you
had listened to our agent more carefully, you would know that your policy does
not cover accidents outside the United States.
4. The
salary we are offering is commensurate with other managers' remuneration.
5. Pursuant
to your invitation, we will interrogate our agent.
6. It would
not be inadvisable for you to affix your signature at this point in time.
7. Our
Accounting Department takes this opportunity to inform you that we have
credited your account for the aforementioned sum.
8. There are
four new menu items we must promote.
9. It is
perfectly clear that meetings held on a monthly basis are most effective.
10. Each and
every employee may change and alter their schedule to accommodate customer
business.
11. As for the
area of athletic shoes, the degree of profits sagged.
12. This is to
inform you that we have a toll-free service line.
13. We must
conduct an investigation of all parking violations before we can give
consideration to your fine.
14. Pursuant
to your request, enclosed please find a job application.
15. Your goal
should be to write business messages that are concise, clear, and written with
courteousness.
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